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2004-10-09 [font]: Thank you :)
2004-10-10 [normal69]: good poem somkeymanson
2004-10-10 [Intrigued Lover From Hell]: thank you
2004-10-10 [font]: Competition is spelt wrong in the banner
2004-10-10 [Sweet Tatia]: Nice poems everyone ^^ I like them. ^^
2004-10-11 [irulan]: Entry #11 - you didn't put your name. =) Please add it!
2004-10-11 [Elmiira]: i totally forgot it...sorry!
2004-10-11 [The Dark Lord]: How many poems can we enter?
2004-10-11 [irulan]: 2 entries! =)
2004-10-11 [The Dark Lord]: thnx i have posted my second one that will be all!
2004-10-12 [Noexistantanymo]: heh, my entry added.. tell me what you think xD
2004-10-12 [mnightshade]: so... ya'll think i have a smidgen of a chance?
2004-10-12 [Noexistantanymo]: It's pretty good [mnightshade]
2004-10-12 [The Dark Lord]: what about my two?
2004-10-12 [Elmiira]: yeah, all are good! :D what do you think of mine, does it have any hope, lol
2004-10-12 [Doormat]: omg it started and nobody told me T_T
2004-10-12 [Sunrose]: You still have a lot of time.. :)
2004-10-13 [Doormat]: woot....made one in 2 hours :)
2004-10-13 [Doormat]: sunrose, "no spider" is spelt "nos pider" in your poem ;D
2004-10-13 [mnightshade]: thx, [Mighty_ Angel],so yours, and i liked the traveller alot, [The Dark Lord]
2004-10-13 [mnightshade]: [Diablo Jr]., the Pumpkin Revolt looks like the best poem yet!
2004-10-13 [Noexistantanymo]: Hehe, i think my poem is great, but around some of the others i don't feel so special anymore >.<
2004-10-13 [The Dark Lord]: thanks [mnightshade]
2004-10-13 [Doormat]: np
2004-10-14 [mnightshade]: yours is great [Noexistantanymo]! Don't stop feeling special!
2004-10-14 [Doormat]: though 'us' is spelt wrong....you spelt it 'os'
2004-10-16 [Sunrose]: [indiechick] and [davis van] your poems are too long: max. 35 lines.. :)
2004-10-16 [Doormat]: not to mention, [indiechick] extremely disturbing :D
2004-10-16 [Noexistantanymo]: And then we got those as Entry #25, 2 lines...
2004-10-16 [Doormat]: [BirdHouse107] your poem is too short min 8 lines
2004-10-16 [Prettyinpink2]: Do ya'll like my poem? I love to rhyme....
2004-10-16 [Doormat]: err...underwea
2004-10-16 [Prettyinpink2]: O.K. i'll fix it thanks.! all fixed....! Yay
2004-10-16 [indiechick]: i kinda based it on the tell tale heart...ISH...
2004-10-16 [Prettyinpink2]: I like it though it's awesome.
2004-10-16 [indiechick]: thank you ^^ nice twist in yours prettininpink
2004-10-16 [Prettyinpink2]: Thankyou..... I thought of it and thought it would be cool. It represents anger, being left to wait by his friends he became angry.
2004-10-16 [indiechick]: aww!
2004-10-16 [Prettyinpink2]: I'm sorry I get kind of carried away.
2004-10-16 [indiechick]: no! no way! tis cool! is the 1 i just put up too weird?
2004-10-17 [davis van]: oh ok i changed mine its shorter now
2004-10-17 [Sunrose]: well done ^^
2004-10-17 [Prettyinpink2]: No! urs is not too weird it's awesome, I bet you might even place! mine is way weirder anyway.
2004-10-17 [indiechick]: ah! finally one i'm happy with! is it ok?
2004-10-17 [Elmiira]: actually...whe
2004-10-17 [indiechick]: ^^ cool
2004-10-17 [Claireabella]: how do's i add my poem?
2004-10-17 [indiechick]: edit page. n add it to the bottom.
2004-10-17 [Claireabella]: tahnk you........oop
2004-10-18 [indiechick]: no probs ^^
2004-10-18 [imsdal]: hey, what do you all proffesionals think of my poem? ^^ It would be nice to get some feedback, so that I can change it, if nescesarry :)
2004-10-18 [The Dark Lord]: My view is that I think it is excellent!
2004-10-18 [indiechick]: Lol i'd like to know if ne1 knows how i can improve mine? tis number 27 ^^ oh n im no pro, but ad luna, urs is cool ^^
2004-10-18 [imsdal]: thanx ^^'... but is'nt there anything i can improve...? Gah, urs is creepy and scary idiechick :P brill! ^__^
2004-10-18 [indiechick]: um not really, although i know its the title n all but it could sound better if you just used halloween instead of halloween's eve? or mebbe you could even use Hallow's Eve?
2004-10-18 [indiechick]: but thats prob just me ^^ dnt listen to me i dont know anything bout poetry really ^.^
2004-10-18 [Prettyinpink2]: Ad Luna Awesome poem..... It rox my sox! tee hee.
2004-10-18 [indiechick]: indeedy ^^
2004-10-18 [Prettyinpink2]: Hi indie, How are u?
2004-10-18 [Claireabella]: YAY!!!!!! my poem went up i know it's like a load of shit but yay !!! it went up hehehehe
2004-10-18 [The Dark Lord]: punk princess's is good, but she spelt creepy wrong....but adamo and indie's, no critisicm needed, they are excellent
2004-10-18 [indiechick]: oh! DL! i HATE you! how can you say mines good when you look at what you've written *sigh*
2004-10-18 [indiechick]: haha sorry im not digging for compliments! i was just saying ^^
2004-10-18 [Prettyinpink2]: Indie u know urs is awesome, so unloving of thou work, that probably doesn't sound right, but u get the point, Urs also Rox my Sox.
2004-10-18 [The Dark Lord]: c im not theonly 1 who like yours....haaaa
2004-10-18 [Claireabella]: hey thanks i will change that 'creepy' now damn me and my spell, never has been my best quality you know.....
2004-10-18 [Claireabella]: done now that better DL? anyway thanks yeah and is it true taht you can have two poems on here? please let me know as i want to post another one up.....
2004-10-18 [The Dark Lord]: thats ok wat making a dig, just poiting out....c now youve changed it its perfect
2004-10-18 [Claireabella]: hahaha yup good not perfect though....
2004-10-18 [The Dark Lord]: Honestly yes it is great. although im not sure it was intentional but u spelt medieval wrong, im not sure if get the middle bit, part from that its excellent.....
2004-10-18 [Elmiira]: it's great! :)
2004-10-18 [Claireabella]: yay finally i got my next one up
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